st George (Summer School) Hello everyone my name is Lucas Herrero Carriedo And i go to the st George summer school.Daniel : Sports: I like sports because y playing : football , basketball , beisbol , hockey .
Mr Gibb: English : I like because I have to learn languages
Mr Gibb : Ict : I like because mi brother Nico help to me an see how do I fix computer problems

good choice of photos and good talk about the teachers... but you need to work more in your vocabulary + need organisation and don't write about yourself.. write about the summer school!!!
ReplyDeleteorganitation
ReplyDeletegood vocabulary
good writening
good presentation good choice of photo but bad vocabulary
ReplyDeletegood work!!! but you have to write more
ReplyDeletegood photo
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDelete- Try to write more about the teachers
- Good photo!
- Very neat